Sociology, Psychology, Biology & Animal Science

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If you’re applying to the Division of General Studies, explain your future career goals. You may also explain how this major relates to your future career goals. describe how you have recently explored or developed this interest inside and/or outside the classroom. You may include any majors or areas of study you’re currently considering.
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If you’re applying to the Division of General Studies, explain your future career goals. You may also explain how this major relates to your future career goals. describe how you have recently explored or developed this interest inside and/or outside the classroom. You may include any majors or areas of study you’re currently considering. (300-400 words)

Tips on how to write:
Introduction (100 Words Or Less)
In this section of the response, your primary goal is to indicate your prospective major, but in a manner that the school would find compelling. Some of the most effective ways to hook the reader are by using figurative language or an anecdote, but there are a plethora of other ways as well — just be creative! Also, make sure your introduction allows for enough elaboration in the body section. The introduction is so crucial to the development of this essay

Body (250 Words Or Less)
Your goal with the body of this essay is to further elaborate on your involvement with your respective major. It is okay to mention extracurriculars and classes in this section, but only if you couple them with explanations of how they impacted you. Consider implementing some additional discussion of your future career plans if you haven’t already done so in the introduction.
The body of your essay doesn’t have to be quite as flashy as the introduction, but it needs to be more purposeful. You might spend less time here on an extended metaphor, and instead opt to explain why your experience in a particular subject area inspired you to pursue it further.

Conclusion
No length is specified in the conclusion, because it varies depending on how many words you have already used, and to what extent your intro/body necessitates closure. If you have a lot of space left, you might mention specific programs or clubs that fit with your major. You could also go into greater depth here regarding your long-term career goals. If you find a program at UIUC that incorporates your career aspirations — take, for example, a school-funded internship program — this is a great place to discuss it.
Otherwise, the conclusion should simply wrap up the main idea of your essay with a general discussion of your interests that you already set forth. Avoid being too repetitive; it’s better to keep your summary brief and to the point. If you began the essay with thematic material, it should resurface in the conclusion. The last sentence of the essay should be powerful enough to leave a lasting impression on the reader. This will ensure that admission counselors remember your essay.
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Profile/Information
The University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign (UIUC) is widely renowned as one of the country’s most influential public research universities. In fact, it has ranked first in National Science Foundation award funding for six consecutive years. Many sources consider UIUC one of the top 50 universities in the world, and some have even ranked its engineering school in the top five worldwide. Boasting over 24 million items in its library collection, it’s no secret that UIUC is an intellectual powerhouse.

Introduction – Please be creative
Undecided major at The University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign (UIUC), interested in
Psychology (took intro class – Brain, Mind and Behavior) & Sociology (took world culture social studies & taking Sociology now);
Or Biology (took Honors Biology & taking AP Biology now) & Animal Science

Body—Please elaborate per suggestions above.

I’m interested in Sociology because I love people watching (people in different moods, culture, backgrounds, languages…) & traveled in Asia, Europe, North and South America
Interested in Psychology – something about human behavior and mind is interesting and intriguing
Career goals – Please write your own & and make some connections between these two.
Interested in Biology – please write your own
Interested in Animal Science because I’m an animal lover since I was little. Became vegetarian in middle school and volunteer at animal shelter in high school
Career goals – animal nutritionist or animal researcher or write your own
Many animal science majors pursue careers in veterinary medicine, including work as a veterinarian, animal nutritionist or animal researcher. Employers include private veterinary clinics, farms and makers of animal food and pharmaceuticals. Some jobs emphasize diagnosis and treatment of illness or injury, while others involve research into how animals respond to foods and medicines.

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Conclusion
Please mention below briefly.
If I study Animal Science, I like to do research at the Prairie Research Institute (engaged in research in agriculture and wildlife)
If I study Psychology, I like to do Capstone Internship (capstone seminar will connect students’ summer internship experiences to their academic major in Psychology and to their career goals.)

 

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